Intertwined
A Poem by
Nancy Lee Shrader
Intertwined
Hearts in the moment intertwined
Blended forever in the soul
Whispered moments of love divine
We’ll walk on the wild side this night
Blended forever in the soul
Hearts open to a new surprise
Love's graffiti written within
As flashes of color explode
Whispered moments of love divine
Ears hear the mesmerizing tone
As hearts sing of the whispered love
Awake my heart in ecstasy
We’ll walk on the wild side this night
Delighting within love’s sweetness
In firework display we rapture
Attaining completeness of soul
Author: Nancy Lee Shrader
By nannalee
© 2008 nannalee (All rights reserved)
© 2008 Nancy Lee Shrader
Reviews
Congratulations on winning second; keep up the pen.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Nice use of the form, though in this particular form, I prefer there to be rhyme. My subjective thought. Wonderful emotions expressed.
John
Posted 15 Years Ago
Nice use of the form, though in this particular form, I prefer there to be rhyme. My subjective thought. Wonderful emotions expressed.
John
ah, this was like falling in love on the fourth of july at the top of the double ferris wheel at a state fair...a summer memory of warm love...great
Posted 15 Years Ago
ah, this was like falling in love on the fourth of july at the top of the double ferris wheel at a state fair...a summer memory of warm love...great
This is a beautiful piece engulfed in romance and a hint of sensuality. Favorite lines:
"Love's graffiti written within..." "Whispered moments of love divine" ~ Lovely.
Posted 15 Years Ago
This is a beautiful piece engulfed in romance and a hint of sensuality. Favorite lines:
"Love's graffiti written within..." "Whispered moments of love divine" ~ Lovely.
Such a beautiful write and I like yur picture, well written......Kim
Posted 15 Years Ago
Such a beautiful write and I like yur picture, well written......Kim
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Added on November 17, 2008
Author
Nancy Lee Shrader Beckley, WV
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Nancy Lee Shrader resides in Beckley, West Virginia. She is author of three books IS IT NOW? The End of Days! IS HE MESSIAH? Messianic Prophecies Revealed! And The Curse of Mayweather House Nancy Lee ..
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