Haiku Stupid Cupid

  

                        

   

                    

 

 

 

 

Hearts blooming in love

Flowers and candy galore

Taste Valentine’s Day

 

Boy’s heart in a spin

Wearing his heart on his sleeve

Chocolate splatters love

 

 

Will she or won’t she

Whisper the words I love you

Be my Valentine

 

 

He gets up his nerve

Marches right up to her door

Flowers behind his back

 

 

He looks all around

Oh where is stupid cupid

With bows and arrows

 

Sure could use some help

One arrow is sufficient

To win a girl’s heart

 

 

She opens the door

A big smile upon her face

And love in her eyes

 

 

Captures the moment

He has spent his last dollar

Gold heart on a chain

 

 

He’s nervous no more

Who needs ole Stupid Cupid?

Her heart, his to hold

Haiku Stupid Cupid

 

          

              

 

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning Haiku-Week-16 Contest!

Sal

[Frances O'Neill]

Ah! Such cutie pies, with their first Valentine feelings fulfilled! Nice string!

[Mason Vail]

I like it! You've captured the nervous anticipation very well! :)