Lift Up the Veils

Haiku Lift up the veils

Lift up the veils that

Darken the delicate moon

Let the moonbeams shine

 

 

In the darkened sky

Moonbeams hidden by the veils

Cascading through space

 

 

 

Veils is what they seem

But another form emerged

Casting doubt inside

 

 

 

A black hole in space

Squirms like a slithering worm

Darkening the moon

 

 

 

Moonbeams can’t escape

It slithers across the moon

Blocking all the love

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Keeping-the-dream-alive contest!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

You handle the hay(na) ku string with such facility and grace.

[Helena]

I loved all the stanzas but especially the last two. Made me
think. Very creative and lovely write Nancy! Thank you
for submitting this to "Keeping the Dream Alive" contest! ~ Helena

[Lizanne]

Anytime you speak of moonbeams, I'm hooked. You hooked me! Loved it.