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A Poem by carla

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this feeling consuming me

why is it there

what does it mean

pain

it hurts so much

im dying

bleeding on the inside

make it stop please

it hurts please god just make it go away

whats the point of trying to smile if its nothing but a mask?

help anyone

im alone again

where has everone gone

where did all these problems come from

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why did you do this to me

you who i depended on the most

losing you did this to me

its was an all consuming flame that  burned within me

now its an all consuming freeze that takes part of me evryday

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im dying

again and again i feel a part of me slipping away

now im almost nothing

numb to the world

soon there will be nothing left

all your fault

all my fault

for believing you and handing myself over on a silver platter

no one can save me

no one

im alone again

all alone

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© 2010 carla


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nice, very nice....kinda dark though....but i digg it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The pain, struggle and disappointment is felt in your words. Sometime we must know the pain to be able to decide to stay or run. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such painful questions that move across the heart and mind. Your work here expresses deep emotion, the depth that leads one to the edge of existence. Powerful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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