Open Sesame Eyes

Instant attraction. A lovely night out captured in time.

Sitting at a table

with the lights

all around us,
Voices trickle into our universe

to remind us
That this is the

centre of the world,

Our faces take a

carousel ride

with conversation,
Your smile charts the frequency of

your imagination,
I need

no further spur,

He showed you a past life

you don't

want to tell me,
This friend of yours, Charles,

saying things that compel me
To feel

quite satisfied,

For now my thoughts hang before us

dangling from

words I've spoken,
And considering these sketches

like paintings

you've smoothly awoken
The sleeping pulse of

nudity pride,

One-thirty in the morning,

muse the romance of glances,
Charles slipped away ages ago

and you're weighing your chances,
Let's just say I

wore black for the white...

clothes on your body,

lain back in your seat,

electricity...
flowing along the yin yang circuit,

day night synchronicity,
Zoom out at the picture;

two beings gazing on

in delight

Fantasy;

nothing but the sound of your voice,
Yet the chatter and tinkling;

glitter reflected on the Rolls-Royce...
moment driving onward,

driving us

Another drink, no,

and you've hardly sipped yours
Strange, no vodka,

bathroom visit,

akward moment,

stand up or look at others pause,
Zoom in; the feeling here, in between our eyes,

is so plush!

Pleasant and weird

to be this delighted
Mirror grins reflect to

the infinity sighted
By your

'open heart, open sesame!'

eyes

My mind fills with the constellation,

tracing the dots of thoughts where

my eyes follow
And these arms and legs and body in black

tuned to you

will surely go
Up where 'we we're gonna get so high...'
and time flies.

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, your poem makes the heart swoon, i could feel the immense desirous feeling of consumation,
i loved the intent focus placed upon each word, in a pixalating form, the ideas draw the soul to ponder
the night skies, constellations set on high, smoothely romantic and drives a man's heart to yearn
for the soft touch of sensuality, deliciously provocative, artistically conveyed, every sentence rolled
upon the next in forward motion, thus creating a passionate flow of thought, natasha, your
talent is clearly visibler and the emphasize you placed upon the imagery touching, absolutely beautiful,
magical, showing the fine balance between resisting temtation and falling in love, excellent.

[Maria]

I love the way your words spoon and embrace somersalting around to find a perfect union as they
return to fondle one another in sound.