cold as you

cold as you

A Poem by leinahtan
"

fire, sooner or later, dies out.

"
 where is that flame 
that used to burn on my name 
 in your eyes? 

 and what used 
to be a light in your smile
 is now but a 
nonchalant despise. 

 it seems as though
you're not the girl i knew.
'cos i've never kissed 
someone who is
 
 cold as you...     

© 2011 leinahtan


Author's Note

leinahtan
play with fire and dare to get burned.

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nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this, it has an almost lyrical tone. Ever think of turning it into a song?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ouch! This one will pull at you, Ice cold love the thoughts in this. Truthful too, when you play with fire you will get burned.....xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


But if you don't play with fire you will never know the consequence of being burned you will never feel how it feels to be taught a lesson

Playing with fire is like playing softball and you the batter but you suck at hitting your most likely to get out or in this case burned

I like this poem alot it's very emotional and beautiful:)

Love it alot keep writing:)
~abbie
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


I just noticed ba, there's always a concluding line. ahahahahaha
The strikethrough just pawned it! :) :) :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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