f*****g first love

f*****g first love

A Poem by leinahtan
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written like a year ago. :) one of my early morning rhymes and lines. how most of them are lost in time, memories din't serve me well but lucky this one's fine. :)

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 let these mirthless eyes
be open for the rest of the day, 
 in search of anything to parallel 
your beauty in any way

though years have past,
 the seasons were gravely unfair. 
no use searching, 
you are but far 
beyond compare...

© 2011 leinahtan


Author's Note

leinahtan
my first love was a witch and a nerd. X)

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not tryying to sound cruel or anything, but this somehow made me laugh. im not sure if it is because i have seen many things like this before (situations) or because i understand completely.
but perfect, very emotional and right to the point.
how should i say....
"beyond compare"

-Morrigan Nicole

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is deep in its simplicity of the words you used! Nice write! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ahaha I've turned into both mwhahahaha I look like a nerd cuz my glasses lol
Btu awesome write :D


~abbie
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


chuiya :) lemme fantasize who's this. ahahahahaha
Second part and the last line is so f*****g epik! !!!!!!!!




Posted 7 Years Ago


lol well you poemis really sweet i love it !:)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2011
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leinahtan
leinahtan

Lapu-Lapu , Cebu, Philippines



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