My heart is
small, but with feelings its full My heart is small, but with pain its
full My heart is small, but understands everyone My heart is small, but no
one understands him
Why? Where isjustice? There isnojustice! Ifthereisjustice, the world will be
fine...
Myheart, My
dear, Smile Because you're alonein this world....
This is my first poem in Hindi. I tried to write a poem using what i've learnt till now. It may be easy language or 'cracked' if i can say. But am glad that i tried, to see the difference later after i get advanced in Hindi.
A Heartfelt Thanks to Rohit Singh who helped me in correcting it.
Thanks alot for your time.
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I don't know Hindi, but I like the English translation anyway.
Since I can't comment on the "actual" poem therefore, I'll resort to commenting on the meaning:
"My heart is small, but understands everyone
My heart is small, but no one understands him"
I really liked those two lines in particular, and in regards to the second stanza, it really seems unjust that only one should understand all but be misunderstood by all at the same time.
I believe if that unfairness was disposed of and everybody would understand everyone, the world might be a better place.
Then again, understanding and accepting, let alone reacting, are not one...
Sometimes all we can do in the face of an injustice we can't help, is smile.
Though I tend to hope there are more than just only ONE understanding heart.
I love how you wrote it in Hindi, I could actually understand the words. So true, so heartfelt, this poem is intense and thoughtful, serene and this passion behind it. This is short, but the meaning is powerful. Adorable poem :)
Thank you for the amazing poem. Your words are true. We do need justice and kindness in our world. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem and thoughts.
Coyote
Your poem left me surprised - even if you are a beginner in Hindi, it doesn't seem like it. I very much liked it and I'll say there are a few mistakes. But never mind, it can be ignored till you learn more of the language. Keep the good work up! :)
this is a very meaningful poem. poignant and lovely. we should smile because we are alone in the world. although that could be a scary thought you just have to gather your inner strength not to follow the crowd. there won;t be justice, so we must be alone and not deal with life's injustices.
Wow. That was quite amazing even if it was your first hindi poem. I myself speak Urdu, but I cannot write it nor hindi. You're pretty good though it seems. Keep going! :)