Trust Me

She said I am able to

Destroy you both

Hearts answered

We’re filled with unlimited love

Nothing can change us

Souls replied

We’re connected forever

Nothing can separate us

She said

I am Doubt

I am Suspect

They

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Reviews

[Sarah]

Lovely, Sad and true. Really good...
:D

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks :)

[Priscilla Moore]

What a striking message!
The hurt is obvious, the passion, beautiful to behold!

[Sahar moonlight]

Thanks :)

[Priscilla Moore]

My pleasure:)

[Nath]

Wonderful write! Sadly, suspicion can ruin the best relationship and doubt, indeed, destroy love bit by bit. Trust is a fragile thing...
Wonderfully penned with those personifications!

[Manpreet]

Nice!!

[CourtneyShay]

very creative i like it

[Amila Jay]

Creative writing .. It's great :))

[Thrinna Mae]

A cleverly written poem...I love the idea here...Well said. Great work!
:)))

[Amata Luna]

Even without words as you say, you still invoked a good amount of emotion in each readers heart and mind. This is another seeming simple yet complex write I read from you. Well penned yet again. A success from a poet's den. ;)

[Reflectus]

Wonderful personification, this is how a relationship should be, undisturbed by all the things that could side track your love for each other. So much has been conveyed in those few words, written rather wonderfully. Great job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great strong write :)