Times Out

A poem I wrote when i was younger

Roses are red, Violets are blue,

I hate everyone, including you. 

There's nothing to do,

Life's a bore, s**t doesn't go down anymore.

There were so much we did when we were younger,

There's nothing left to do as we get older.

We'd drive around all day and talk about people we don't like, 

We'd crash parties and go to clubs,

We'd stay out all night 

We's go to the malls and try on clothes, 

even though we could never afford them.

It was just as fun to see ourselves and prance around like celebrities back then. 

Life's gone on, times all out,

There's nothing left to do but scream and shout.

Bask in the knowledge, keep in mind,

We had out fun, now's a new generation's time.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I do like the below lines.
"Roses are red, Violets are blue,
I hate everyone, including you.
There's nothing to do,
Life's a bore, s**t doesn't go down anymore"
I enjoyed the complete poem. Real and amazinb use of words. Thank you Hanabi for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[WasteDragon]

I can certainly relate....reminds me of that song by John Cougar Melancamp "Oh yeah, life goes on! Long after the thrill of living has gone!" I hate that song. But yeah. Sometimes it feels like youth is over way before it actually is over. It sucks. This definitely expressed that suckitude, laf, sigh.

[Brandon Taylor-Black]

It brings a feeling of nostalgia to the reader. Well done, I enjoyed it immensely. A couple of parts didn't flow as easily as others, but that doesn't detract from the overall piece.

[DIVYA]

Indeed, time passes and the new ones take over. One is left with no zest for things that brought a thrill earlier on. A very interesting poem.

[Carissa Sink]

I like it, it evokes emotion, feelings of sorrow and loss.

[CuddlyBunny]

Very good I like it. Keep up the good work fee spelling mishaps but otherwise great.