"Where are you now?"

          " Where are you now?”

I can’t escape the mem’ries of the past,
You really made a permanent mark.
As I hear the song we used to sing
Everything comes back and makes me sane….
Sleepless nights in this four walls again
Where are you now? Why did you leave?
I want you to come back
But you were nowhere to be seen….
Part of me wonders, what if I tell you that day.
How much you really mean to me
Would you ever dare to leave me?
Would you ever dare to lose me?
=-MGCN-=

Reviews

[The dark story]

perfectly expressed emotions.you wrote it in such an elegant way........the staring itself was really very touching.great work my friend!!!!!!

[natzky]

thank you very much for appreciating my work...:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

This was a Great poem and we can all relate. It Reminds me of "where are you now" by Nazareth. Awesome write

[Drowning with Stars]

The third line especially caught my attention, in my experience music goes hand in hand with emotion and that one line gives adds a lot more to the poem

[natzky]

thanks for the comments..heheh

[THIS ACCOUNT IS CLOSED]

i felt this way when my Dad died... he left and he will never come back.

Sleepless nights in this four walls again
Where are you now? Why did you leave?
I want you to come back

This made me cry... Nice poem though :(

[CHRIS ANDES]

it sings into my soul...

[EvilAngel]

beautiful and well constructed. youre gr8:)

[shardsofFrance]

woah...de ja vu

[paparapapa]

Regret is very evident in this poem. I loved the feeling it wants to convey to the readers. Also,it has nice flow to it. Good job. :)