Hazy Recollections

Hazy Recollections

A Poem by flowetry07

It’s not just your arms, no longer stopping my body from shivering, that I miss,

It’s not only your eyes boring into the deep crevices of my soul,

My heart still beats to the memory of your heart’s tempo.

My lips still tingle in anticipation of meeting yours.

When the tears start to fall from my eyes without warning, I know

That even when I feel empty 

I am still full of the pieces you left behind.

© 2013 flowetry07


Author's Note

flowetry07
Just some emotions I need to verbalize.

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To be quite honest, I found the poem incredibly cheesy initially. You clearly have a really powerful emotion that you're trying to convey and I can tell that you have a good grasp of the beauty of the English language, but it's just not being portrayed through this work. HOWEVER, I am absolutely infatuated with the last two lines, they couldn't be anymore perfect.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

flowetry07

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughtful review. I appreciate your comments.



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You've portrayed your emotions well in this piece. It's darkly beautiful. Well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

flowetry07

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your review.
Remnants of once glorious romance. We write to preserve those stolen moments. And this one reflects the pain of a love which no longer exists.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem...it makes for flashback in the mind of the reader....yea i just had a flashback..lol Nice!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To be quite honest, I found the poem incredibly cheesy initially. You clearly have a really powerful emotion that you're trying to convey and I can tell that you have a good grasp of the beauty of the English language, but it's just not being portrayed through this work. HOWEVER, I am absolutely infatuated with the last two lines, they couldn't be anymore perfect.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

flowetry07

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughtful review. I appreciate your comments.
I understand the feeling, thought and emotion, however one or three questions are raised, will read more to find the answers.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

flowetry07

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your review. I appreciate your thoughtful words. Please let me know what questios are .. read more
Seven lines and a fantastic poem, so descriptive and crystal-clear thanks to the last line, a delight to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing description gave life to the words in the poem. I like the flow of thoughts and the desire in your words. It is true. Pieces of people we allowed in. Stay with us forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

flowetry07

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words and incite regarding this poem. I'm glad the emotion I felt writing th.. read more
Well written work.
Sometimes memories come in front of us and engulf our present.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

flowetry07

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the feedback and I absolutely agree.
I love the ending realization, "That even when I feel empty
I am still full of the pieces you left behind."

You poured your heart out when you wrote this, and it is truly beautiful.

Amazing expression of emotion. This is a strong and heartfelt poem.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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flowetry07

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your feed back it means a lot.
Calissa Knox

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Natasha!

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