Rambling Thoughts

Just a dreamy state of mind of a sleepy kid, as fantastic images revolve around.......

Hmmm. It is an odd poem after all, 
An “Odd” one for sure,
An Odd one, isn’t it?
Sure, it is! Of course.
But it is a nice one too,
I…….. am not sure but am sure
Myself am a gamer,
feeling glad and proud,
do you know why?
I would like to play a game,
won’t you?
Bridge isn’t my cup of tea,
Soooo Unfortunate!
I like red robes, don’t you?
Let’s play Word " building, shall we?
Oooh! I would like to dance!
But weren’t we here for something else?
No no, you boring old man,
Yes yes, we are here for dancing!
Listen to me ladies and gentlemen!
No Guys, listen to me!
No!
Yes!
No!
Break it up, come on,
I want to dance and sing,
No! Let’s play!
Enough! Let me decide!

Ahem!!

Author's Note

I really want qualitative reviews and improve my writing skills..... I would really appreciate all the help I can get!! :)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like the poem and your rambling thoughts. Thank you for sharing...:).................

[Neeraj V Murali]

Thanks >3 Lovely of you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................

[melissa]

This is amazing poem i hope you get all your poems published because I want a copy of them

[Neeraj V Murali]

Thank you.. I do hope so! ;)

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most entreating and insightful piece that arranges nicely on the screen, well done, good read.

[Neeraj V Murali]

Thanks :D :D

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your welcome.

[Mirra]

Entertaining poem. As I read to the end it made feel like I am the one having those thoughts. It is a free writing kind of poem. Love it!

[Neeraj V Murali]

Thanks :D ....

[New Theory]

Rambling thoughts indeed, lots of things going in your mind.

[Neeraj V Murali]

Thanks :D ....

[New Theory]

You are welcome ..:)

[Priyanshi Dass]

An amusing write. You really justified your title. I love the quirkiness of the write. Keep writing. Have a nice day.

[Neeraj V Murali]

Thanks a ton.... :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This was very entertaining and so well written :)

[Neeraj V Murali]

Thanks Vidya...... :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)