Moving on

I just wrote it in 5 minutes, when someone asked me to do so on ask.fm ..... Hope it is nice.....

Hitting the brick wall,

Maybe after a brawl?

Wham! It feels awful!

Your pride, it may ruffle....

Slumped down with a sigh,

Almost ready to cry,

Ah! Is it a bout of love ?

or something sinister and above ?

Being weighted down won't do,

You should get through.....

Come on, You are brave,

Just don't rave,

Move on, Move on,

Before the chance is foregone,

Light up the lamp of hope,

Clinging on to the ladder or rope,

Clutch the motivators,

Ride up the elevators,

Come on , you are mature enough,

You can act tough !!!

Author's Note

Just post your reviews, negative positive, anything!! :)

Reviews

[melissa]

This is another amazing poem keep up the great work i love reading them a lot

[Neeraj V Murali]

Thanks >> Lovely of you! :)

[Konigin]

I like for only being written in 5 mins.... and to do it cause someone asked... wow... I can't write poetry on command to save my life. But good job nonetheless. It was good for being rushed! :)

[Neeraj V Murali]

I love writing anything as long as someone provides me with a review..... :D :D

It can be improved , right ?

[Konigin]

Absolutely! You can improve anything you set your mind to. :D