Wooden

Wooden

A Poem by Neal S

Wrap me in tomorrows

For I am small

Behind bars 

You are golden

 My skin dangles from wooden bones

 For I am weak

My light is yours to take

Drink it up

© 2016 Neal S


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Satirical read, like the linkage of words and the cliff-hanger of an ending, I want more lol
well written

Posted 6 Years Ago


"Wooden"
Neal S,
I wondered is this had to do with relationship
between the young and the old. If we have the
priviledge of knowing someone older than we;
oh what a treasure. For they have lived and
experinced so much and lived in a differing
time, culture and condition so different from ours.
They have so much to share and teach:
"for I am small
behind bars
You are golden
My skin dangles from wooden bones
For I am weak
My light is yours to take
Drink it up"
Great poem at least to what was gleaned from
my perspective.
blessings,
Kathy


Posted 6 Years Ago


Diggin that one too. R xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neal S

7 Years Ago

Well I dig that you're digging it..Thanks
Second last line is stunning.
open to interpretation...
I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neal S

7 Years Ago

Thanks i'm glad you like it.
Wouldn't it be great if those tomorrows never had to end. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neal S

7 Years Ago

Indeed it would :) ..Thank you so much for reading my work.
sounds like a love poem,and a good one..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neal S

7 Years Ago

Well thank you Sir.
 wordman

7 Years Ago

you`re welcome

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Added on October 20, 2016
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Hello everyone. My name is Neal Sanford and i'm a chef from Tupelo Mississippi. I've been writing for what seems like my entire life but just of late been keeping a record of them. My main focus is po.. more..

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