Platony.

Platony.

A Poem by Desert Rose

a Pebble,
in the Belly of Insanity,
an ice cube,
in the Mouth of Hell, 
a Blaze,
in the Gale of a Trachea, 
a Breeze,
in the Maze of a Nose.

an Aroma,
with every whiff,
a Wildfire,
with every stroke,
a Tide,
with every smack, 
a Zephyr,
with every heed.


a Wormhole..with every bat of an Eye..


© 2016 Desert Rose



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Desert Rose
enjoy..


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I miss your writing. Where you at.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

i miss writing myself, sitting on a few here, waiting for it to materialize,
was in Dubai a c.. read more
Kirstywood

1 Year Ago

I'll be waiting.
Yeah I can't believe I passed you. Crazy.
I came back earlier than .. read more
Really nice poem, well thought out, as usual. This was my favorite bit:

a Blaze,
in the Gale of a Trachea,
a Breeze,
in the Maze of a Nose.

A very unique way to describe this, great imagery and metaphor happening here.
THanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

:) Thank you for reading!!
A tactile piece, thought process of words, rather than prose really, a well executed piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks again Thomas!
a worm hole with every bat of an eye. Wonderful line

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

it's always like that in the very beginning, when you meet someone new, but who's at the same time n.. read more
Smooth and elegant. keep it up.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks Ghost, i will :)
Definitely a powerful read. The word choice and flow are very nice. Keep up the good work :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks Hayli!! so sweet of you!
Very nice flow of words. I had to read again. Words have great power. You gave them strength and reason. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your time!! i truly appreciate it! :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
nice work!
keep it up there!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks Amy! :)
Amy R

1 Year Ago

ur welcome!!
Brilliant use of personification. Thank you for the read request.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

glad you liked it, your opinion matters, be sure to check out my other writings too :)
you painted a vivid image ,great flow as well

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

thanks for your support Wordman! :)

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Added on March 14, 2016
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Tags: Love, Death, Bliss, Anger, Plato, Soulmate, Hopelessness, Dark, Happiness, Pleasure, Pain, Senses, Elements, Insanity

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Desert Rose
Desert Rose

Jounieh, Lebanon



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