Byronic.

Byronic.

A Poem by Desert Rose
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So much Distance,
We have covered,
With just mere Words,

Yet this Longing,
Unquenchable,
Unrelenting,
Unrepentant.

So much Seasons,
We have untold,
With just mere Dreams,

Yet this Recluse,
Enlivening,
Enblissening,
Enkindling.



© 2016 Desert Rose



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Solid and strong words.
"So much Seasons,
We have untold,
With just mere Dreams,"
The above lines were my favorite. You left a lot for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

i believe the 'fitting' word would be "So many* Seasons"
but because i'm writing in fours, i.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome. I enjoyed this poem.



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Solid and strong words.
"So much Seasons,
We have untold,
With just mere Dreams,"
The above lines were my favorite. You left a lot for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

i believe the 'fitting' word would be "So many* Seasons"
but because i'm writing in fours, i.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome. I enjoyed this poem.
A follow me type of piece, well written and engaging, well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank You!! (^^)
A piece that's very easy to relate to. We hardly know what the future holds for us, especially with the relationships we have with other people. All we can do is try to make our dreams for the future a reality, good work :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Exactly..
Thank you Amber!! :)
wonderful work :) enjoyed reading it and could relate to it on many levels.. thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank YOU for reading, Ria! :)
Ok, be my guest.

fergul.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Never said I was any bloody good. Tell you what, I'll have another bash and see if I can improve, got an idea about a kid from the past bubbling in the old grey matter.

I might even remove the first two crappy attempts, I was only taking the piss with them.

fergul.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Okidoki (^^)
Will be waiting for your read request ;)
To be honest mate, I think Byron would be turning in his grave if he read this.

Sorry and all that, but I just can't churn out a review that strokes your ego, which is what most people on this site seem to do, it's dishonest.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

nope, fine with your opinion, so long as it's honest,
i'm not in it for the ego, quite the co.. read more
Wonderful word-smithing, Neo:) Splendid read:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank you!!! much appreciated!!! :) i'll be reading yours now!
a powerful write,makes a statement !

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks Wordman!
I really like how this is set up.
Keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks Emily! :)

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Tags: Space, Time, Love, Lust, Longing, Images, Words, Solitude, Agony, Stories, Bliss, Patience, Strange, Dream, Confusion

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Desert Rose
Desert Rose

Jounieh, Lebanon



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