Byronic.

Byronic.

A Poem by Desert Rose
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So much Distance,
We have covered,
With just mere Words,

Yet this Longing,
Unquenchable,
Unrelenting,
Unrepentant.

So much Seasons,
We have untold,
With just mere Dreams,

Yet this Recluse,
Enlivening,
Enblissening,
Enkindling.

© 2016 Desert Rose


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Solid and strong words.
"So much Seasons,
We have untold,
With just mere Dreams,"
The above lines were my favorite. You left a lot for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

8 Years Ago

i believe the 'fitting' word would be "So many* Seasons"
but because i'm writing in fours, i.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. I enjoyed this poem.



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Distance is difficult, but can create a bond different than that which we find in person. It has it dark sides though, and quite a lot of disadvantages, which I learned outweigh the good... ;) Cool piece..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

8 Years Ago

well, Dark or Bright, Joyous or Sorrowful, i'm living to learn..& learning to live ;) thank you!
M. L. F.

8 Years Ago

Yep, when you're green you grow, when you're ripe you rot... ;)
Beautifully crafted! The use of wording here is thrilling :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

8 Years Ago

Thank you!!! come back for more!! :)

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Added on April 4, 2016
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Tags: Space, Time, Love, Lust, Longing, Images, Words, Solitude, Agony, Stories, Bliss, Patience, Strange, Dream, Confusion

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Desert Rose
Desert Rose

Jounieh, Lebanon



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