Awakening.

Awakening.

A Poem by Desert Rose

Glowing light of the Moon that Eve

October brought a pair to weave

Over simple passions & wine

Distant bodies, two souls entwine


Notwithstanding Circumstances

In their trysts they found solaces 

Growing steady, unwavering 

Heed the calls for awakening

The flames thru days have burned & turned


Scorched the nights & secretly yearned

As that bonfire must be contained

Resting cinders in ashes tamed

And Wind, only time will endow 

Hope of a wildfire, drift off now 


© 2016 Desert Rose



Author's Note

Desert Rose
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The flames thru days have burned & turned

Scorched the nights & secretly yearned
As that bonfire must be contained
Resting cinders in ashes tamed

Favorite stanzas above. They are really pretty. There is a lot of passion in this piece and that is nice.
Thanks for sharing it..
..Misty

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

how sweet of you to review!!
working on a few more, hopefully done with one this week!
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Scorched the nights & secretly yearned
As that bonfire must be contained
Resting cinders in ashes tamed
And Wind, only time will endow
Hope of a wildfire, drift off now

i love this part
beautiful work my friend

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks Again zunie!!
zunie frost

1 Year Ago

welcome !!! i'm looking forward to read more of you work
Last stanza is mind-blowing!
I loved the surreal yet so vivid piece of art.
There were many lines that completely amazed me with their depth and meaning.
Great work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

:) I'm glad you enjoyed it!! thanks again!!
Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
This is a very beautiful poem! Wonderful imagery and some incredible metaphors. Very well structured and polished. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks again Hailey!! i enjoyed writing this one!
Last three lines were stellar. Great meter. Good rhyming. Sweet imagery...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks Lorraine! so nice of you to drop by! :)
Lorraine Montez

1 Year Ago

My pleasure, Neo ;}
The flames thru days have burned & turned

Scorched the nights & secretly yearned
As that bonfire must be contained
Resting cinders in ashes tamed

Favorite stanzas above. They are really pretty. There is a lot of passion in this piece and that is nice.
Thanks for sharing it..
..Misty

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

how sweet of you to review!!
working on a few more, hopefully done with one this week!
read more
Effortless flow Neo...a joy to absorb and meander through...passionate and at the same time carries a tinge of heaviness :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

glad you liked it! can't say that enough but i truly enjoyed writing this one!
Thank You Pop.. read more
Lovely celestial references. Lots of passion between the lines. Well written. Lydi***

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

though i enjoyed writing this & it took some time,
i feel like i'm not doing that feeling in .. read more
a highly descriptive piece that allows the reader to roam, not to rigid, well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review!! much appreciated!!
The good description took reader to places and thoughts. I like the tone and honesty in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

& in return, i thank you for your kind words & perception,
i'm really enjoying this!
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I enjoyed the poem and you are welcome.
Thanks for the read request. brilliant writing. keep it up.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks Ghost!
so nice of you to drop by & read!!

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Added on April 17, 2016
Last Updated on April 24, 2016
Tags: Awakening, Fire, Soulmates, Relationships, Love, Seasons, Time, Bliss, Pain, Separation, Union, Death, Life, Change, Abandonment, Longing, Yearning, Light, Dark, Beautiful, Strange, Passion, Hope

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Desert Rose
Desert Rose

Jounieh, Lebanon



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