Karma. (Sing in Silence)

Karma. (Sing in Silence)

A Poem by Desert Rose
"

Life & it's funny ways..

"

Your Smile is a Shotgun,

But my Silence is a Siren.

Emotional Cacophony,

I'm Singing in Silence.


My fear, your delight,

Lest you Forget,

Time is but a Glimpse,

The Seed will grow.


After all that has been unsaid,

& all that has been done,

Her prewritten verses,

She has sung to us in Silence.


Your fear, my delight,

Lest you Forget,

Time is but a Glimpse,

The Seed has grown.


My Smile is a Shotgun,

But your Silence is a Siren.

Emotional Cacophony,

You're Singing in Silence.


© 2016 Desert Rose



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Desert Rose
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The balance here is fierce...you always voice from the depths of a passionate emotion...it weaves through your words with a heat...tangible and gripping...I'm not sure which is more poignant, that smile or the silence...both have their potent place in such cacophony...excellent Neo...blessings...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

you must be one of the best who review my poems!
Poppy Ruth, i salute you!! :)
Thank .. read more
Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

Namaste dear Neo, you are most welcome, my pleasure :)



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This made me smile, I think many married couples go through the silent siren stage. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


This was fantastic! Short,clever and well woven. Your reader never skips a beat so I am hard pressed to give even a glimps of criticism. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Mr. Lopez! that's so kind of you!! :)
I like the dance here. You have created a lot of imagery in a small space. A coy exchange between the two poeple that is actually heated and supercharged just beneath the surface of benality. Good piece.
..Misty

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

1 Year Ago

LOVE the title, by the way.. I'm a fan of the concept of karma. ;)
Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

i know it's called a concept, but i do believe that it's both real & a b***h ;) *debatable* lol
M. L. F.

1 Year Ago

Actually I am hoping it's a b***h.. ;)
Passion, it can kill us, and make us feel things we've never wanted to feel. Things get heated and when they do, it's like an explosion. Great work here :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

that is correct :)
Thanks again Amber!
Woah! This is a gripping piece!
The smile and silence both hold the power to kill and revive any soul. And you portrayed it with eloquent precision.
Enjoyed reading this very much!
Kudos!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Jyoti!! thank you very much!
Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

You are welcome!
"After all that has been unsaid,
& all that has been done,
Her prewritten verses,
She has sung to us in Silence."

Great stanza. I love your imagery. & I love how you introduced and concluded the same verse.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

:) Karma,
whatever you do comes back to you (^^)
i was aiming to capture just that,read more
A most perfected piece that strives to have anguish at it's core, well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thomas,
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank You! :)
The balance here is fierce...you always voice from the depths of a passionate emotion...it weaves through your words with a heat...tangible and gripping...I'm not sure which is more poignant, that smile or the silence...both have their potent place in such cacophony...excellent Neo...blessings...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

you must be one of the best who review my poems!
Poppy Ruth, i salute you!! :)
Thank .. read more
Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

Namaste dear Neo, you are most welcome, my pleasure :)
loved this one...
Your Smile is a Shotgun,
But my Silence is a Siren.
Emotional Cacophony,
I'm Singing in Silence.
:) enjoyed reading it..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks for stopping by!! Truly appreciate it!
This is a very powerful poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and my favourite verse is "But my silence is a siren." I think that is a beautiful juxtaposition. It's very difficult to express poems in such a way but you did a wonderful job of it. Keep up the great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your feedback & support Maya!
i'm so glad you enjoyed it!!
it's true, .. read more

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