Primal.

Primal.

A Poem by Desert Rose
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After watching Spirit: Stallion of the Cimarron

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Little, by Little..



I'm starting to Realize that,



Maybe, we need.



To Learn.



How to Unlearn.  



What we have Learned.  



Maybe. 



Just Maybe.
  


Humanity’s primordial Mistake,  



is simply,



the fact that, 



We learned to Talk…  



© 2016 Desert Rose



Author's Note

Desert Rose
enjoy.


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Sometimes I wonder what it would be like if we didn't have our sense of self; but then I would never be able to know what it would be like to have no sense of self because i'd need a sense of self to notice we didn't have one...
Anyway, silly comment, I know.
It's what this reminds me of.
The images go nicely with it. Personally I think your work doesn't need the aid of pictures because it can speak for itself but I like what you've done with it nonetheless.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

lol, i know, but i figured it would add more 'drama' to it, some people aren't good with words & pre.. read more
Kirstywood

1 Year Ago

You're welcome, Neo. I always look forward to reading your work.



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Beautiful photos and good words. Thank you for sharing.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank YOU for your review Coyote!! :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
What a lovely presentation this is! Interesting concept....and one that is certainly thought provoking. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Lydia! Thank you very much!! :)
How great these are. Wow, more people need to see them. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Indeed they should :) thank you for your review Valentine!
Wow...
Just wow...
I have (ironically to the poem) been struck speechless. This was the most real thing I've seen in my life.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

i'd like to thank you for your wonderful words,
it was truly heartwarming of you!
i'l.. read more
Very clever, and a great point. Enigma is the s**t, by the way... Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
..Misty

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Enigma has kept me chill since I grabbed one of my father's CDs at around 8-9 :)
Thank YOU fo.. read more
I often have the exact same thought. I'm reminded by the lyric from Apeman by the Kinks "given half the chance I'd be taking off my clothes and living in the jungle"
Nice write

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

hehe, true,
we got what it takes to achieve higher consciousness & now more than ever..& what.. read more
Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

thank you for your time by the way!
Show, don't tell. That's a lovely message and definitely one to contemplate! I love the simplicity of this piece and how you highlighted your message with photographs. Very effective use of two different mediums together. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks again for reading & your constant support Hailey! :)
Hailey Juliet James

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome. my pleasure!
That was really touching with all of the pictures! A really unique idea to drive your point home, and I must agree. Our mouths get us into so much trouble, sometimes it would just be easier to keep them shut. Loved it :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks Amber!! :) indeed they do ;P
WoW!!!
maybe.......you are right....
loved the experiment......
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks Pushkar!
The pics are taking the words and they are definitely speaking the words, I love love this. Maybe we need to unlearn what we have learnt and be like little tots, life will be so easier that way

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Rose

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you like it Cassie!! Thank you for your kind review!! :)

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