this is our love story

this is our love story

A Poem by bella
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Someday I’ll call

And that day will be the coldest day of the year

Where I warm my hands with the stove

And I won’t be reminded of the day

I made you stay up all night

Just to watch the snow fall

From our big bay window

Snuggled under our red blanket


Someday I’ll call

And that day will be on a warm spring day

Where when I walk outside I don’t even feel the cool breeze

And I don’t even hear the birds chirp

And I won’t be reminded of the day

When we walked by the water

And you put your arm around me for the first time

And the butterflies haven’t stopped


Someday I’ll call

And that day will be so hot I feel heat in my lungs

A different fire than the flame you filled my lungs with

And I won’t be reminded of the day

When we went swimming

And I splashed you

And the way you looked at me, when the water cleared

Put sparkles back in my eyes


Someday I’ll call

And that day will be a cool autumn day

Where I have to bundle,

because you of all people know how cold I get

And I won’t grab your sweatshirt first

And I won’t be reminded of the day

Where I made pumpkin pie

And my grandmother taught you to knit


And I’ll call on this day

Because I’ll hear your voice and I won’t cry

I’ll hear your soft tongue roll in every ‘r’

And I won’t melt

I’ll hear your amazing silence

And I won’t wait on your every breath

I’ll apologize without begging

I’ll never beg unapologetically again


I hope I make this call soon





© 2017 bella



Author's Note

bella
This is to help me recover so please be nice :)

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Where Suns cant hide and Stars hang high, a Silver lake and onyx skies. oh but how beautiful it could be. It is a thing of passion, and the past has no place in it. Nothing will stop the way you will feel from now on, but nothing will harm it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Wow this is so amazing!!! The writing, vivid descriptions, and language present an image image and beautiful emotions!

Posted 3 Months Ago


bella

3 Months Ago

Thank you!
this is amazing!! I am so glad that this as a way to recover, I do the same thing with my writing, I have a suggestion for the ending. the end is kind of unfitting for the whole piece, the very last line I would do some tweaking to, but besides that, keep up the great work!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Wow , who can believe that you're just 14 ! ! It's amazing you will be great writer, keep going girl 💪 💖

Posted 4 Months Ago


Bittersweet poetic pie . Wonderfully mix with emotions and vivid pictures. Welldone.

Posted 4 Months Ago


bella

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much
I do understand this poem. I believe we need final end. Eye to eye and voice to voice. Last place and words needed. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to proper ending. Thank you Bella for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


I like it. It make you think about thinks. really good.

Posted 4 Months Ago


I like it. As a therapeutic piece I think it's building to a moment that may or may not happen, but the therapy is also in the writing; the attempt to prepare. Thanks.

Posted 4 Months Ago


I like it. Only minor quibbles, like dumping the word "even" from S2, because it adds nothing.

I'd also rethink "I’ll never beg unapologetically again." Given the reader doesn't know why the split occurred and why begging didn't work, they may well bog down on "unapologetically." You might think of telling why, and why not begging might work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


This poem is amazing and tugs at every heartstring,my dear.

Posted 4 Months Ago


bella

4 Months Ago

Thank you!

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A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
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