this is our love story

this is our love story

A Poem by bella
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Someday I’ll call

And that day will be the coldest day of the year

Where I warm my hands with the stove

And I won’t be reminded of the day

I made you stay up all night

Just to watch the snow fall

From our big bay window

Snuggled under our red blanket


Someday I’ll call

And that day will be on a warm spring day

Where when I walk outside I don’t even feel the cool breeze

And I don’t even hear the birds chirp

And I won’t be reminded of the day

When we walked by the water

And you put your arm around me for the first time

And the butterflies haven’t stopped


Someday I’ll call

And that day will be so hot I feel heat in my lungs

A different fire than the flame you filled my lungs with

And I won’t be reminded of the day

When we went swimming

And I splashed you

And the way you looked at me, when the water cleared

Put sparkles back in my eyes


Someday I’ll call

And that day will be a cool autumn day

Where I have to bundle,

because you of all people know how cold I get

And I won’t grab your sweatshirt first

And I won’t be reminded of the day

Where I made pumpkin pie

And my grandmother taught you to knit


And I’ll call on this day

Because I’ll hear your voice and I won’t cry

I’ll hear your soft tongue roll in every ‘r’

And I won’t melt

I’ll hear your amazing silence

And I won’t wait on your every breath

I’ll apologize without begging

I’ll never beg unapologetically again


I hope I make this call soon





© 2017 bella



Author's Note

bella
This is to help me recover so please be nice :)

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that was really cutie :) :) it was set up awesome, u did an amazing job!!!

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Sky
The most sweetest and ever loving heart, can only frame such a beautiful prose. I wish, that day should come into your life soon. Life in love simply awesomeness :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


im a sucker for a love story, and you're writing honestly amazes me.

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review my poems!

Posted 1 Month Ago


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JC
this brought me back to so many memories of my own, you brought back the images and odours wrapped in nostalgia...and with that, the heartbreaking but also freeing pain of lost loves....beautiful poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Where Suns cant hide and Stars hang high, a Silver lake and onyx skies. oh but how beautiful it could be. It is a thing of passion, and the past has no place in it. Nothing will stop the way you will feel from now on, but nothing will harm it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wow this is so amazing!!! The writing, vivid descriptions, and language present an image image and beautiful emotions!

Posted 5 Months Ago


bella

5 Months Ago

Thank you!
this is amazing!! I am so glad that this as a way to recover, I do the same thing with my writing, I have a suggestion for the ending. the end is kind of unfitting for the whole piece, the very last line I would do some tweaking to, but besides that, keep up the great work!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Wow , who can believe that you're just 14 ! ! It's amazing you will be great writer, keep going girl 💪 💖

Posted 5 Months Ago


Bittersweet poetic pie . Wonderfully mix with emotions and vivid pictures. Welldone.

Posted 6 Months Ago


bella

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much
I do understand this poem. I believe we need final end. Eye to eye and voice to voice. Last place and words needed. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to proper ending. Thank you Bella for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago



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