to live or die

poem of lost love

To live or die

 

To live or die, which choice do I make

Do I live in this endless hell, this dark night with no end?

How to go on when you have no soul or do I end it all?

But if i do the unspeakable, do I take a bunch of pills and go out in endless slumber?

Or do I use a blade and die screaming your name?

Do you care if I live or die?

Was any of it real for you?

I know it was for me that's why im left in this endless hell

Author's Note

My first poem i am sharing with others

Reviews

[Revery]

Very real, very profoundly intense. It is almost overwelming to read.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the passion and pain in this poem. When we are on the edge. Easy to desire the good and bad road. Sometime a trip to hell can make us appreciate the good days when they appear. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote