Do You Remember?

Do You Remember?

A Poem by Neythan Cardoso
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This was when I was going though some bumps in my relationship and I wrote this to remind us of what it was like.

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Do you remember when we had no care?
Do you remember when our love was fresh in the air?
Do you remember the day I first walked by you?
Beautiful everything I saw I was shy too
Do you remember that same night?
Texting going back and fourth with fright?
Not knowing if I was going to say the wrong thing or do the right thing
But I do know one thing
I liked you.
So every last waking moment I spoke my heart to you let my river of thoughts flow into your mind.
The look on your face so kind and so shined and beautiful.
So do you remember the first time we kissed?
The heat and tension was so furious and so hot it hissed?
My lips ever so slightly getting closer and closer to yours
The moment feeling as is took forever as time has gotten me frozen within your galores.
Our lips touched and my mind and my sensations fluttered like a bird escaping from a cage
I didn't want to stop I had this love rage and I could begin to explain how hard it was to gage.
So do you remember?
How hard it was to kiss without smiling back at you?
How hard it was for us to contain ourselves while trying to walk while our lips wanted to be together and talk?
I've only been with you every day of the week and I can hardly bear
 The look of those eyes and the beautiful blonde hair.
Which you loved caressed
Having this beautiful young girl I was seriously blessed
But
Do you remember crying to me that day?
That time behind the school standing there kissing each other?
All of a sudden a cry of tears and freight
I asked you if you were alright
You told me yes and you were afraid if I would leave outright
Because it seemed too good to be true
Because I gave no cry of shame and anger because I had you
I told you from the beginning when I blew out that dandelion in the field that day that I wish and I promised I'd never go away
That I would love you every day
Never giving up on my raging love way
 Because you were amazing and the girl for me
and it's sad for every other man because they say there are a lot of fish in the sea
But the true one thing that fills me up with glee
Is that there isn't another guy out there in the world for you..
 but me.

© 2015 Neythan Cardoso


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another beautifully written poem!
keep writing! :)
-Amy

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neythan Cardoso

8 Years Ago

Best believe I'm going to keep writing! :) thank you!
Amy R

8 Years Ago

:) wonderful!
ur welcome!

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Added on August 6, 2015
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Neythan Cardoso
Neythan Cardoso

Stoughton, MA



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From the Boston area, I've always felt like I was never understood for how I felt about something. No matter how complicated or how simple it was. I tell the stories of my life on paper and I want.. more..

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