Lonely Soul

At times i really miss,

All the glory that i used to had.

Never thought it would turn this way,

This strange, this lonely, this bad.

 

In the room of loneliness,

Want to sit back and cry.

Seeing around the world i am in,

Want to run away or go fly.

 

Oblivious of the world around,

Dwelling on thoughts very deep.

Strange was the feeling,

Under my skin that would creep.

 

Darkness and sadness engulfed me,

Made my vision blurry and unclear.

Tried enough to be tough and strong,

Through the eyes rolled down a tear.

 

Nobody now seems to care,

Pain is all my heart now bears.

Holding up my head high,

My smile now hides all the fears.

 

When uncertainty filled my heart,

With a smile i got off the bed.

Having no one to share the journey,

Lonely was the path i led.

Reviews

[star73]

hello nibhz I love your poem I like to read and see everyone's poems so unique and different emotions well done I hope I can learn alot from being on this site. I'm hoping to get my work published and be an author is my dream=)

[nibhz]

thank you so much! this site is indeed the best for this! To read more check this- http://nibhz.wordpress.com

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I believe in the second line, it should be "to have" instead of "to have".

I have read some of your latest poems and it seems you're having problems, my friend? It's good to let it all out and let your poems speak for yourself. Tell us if you need advice or something.. :) Keep writing, poet.

[nibhz]

thanks for the correction, i think due to rhyming i missed that out!

I am touched that you noticed my poems so deeply, there is no problem, it's just that i tend to write when i feel low! and these all poems are result of that! :P thanks anyways!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Same here. ;)

[naina verma]

ur words have immense power of captivity.. touched touched n touched.. please bless me with such captivating words..: )

[nibhz]

thank you so much for your appreciating words! Read more! :)

[Tiffany Boles]

I love it! Such expression and I can relate to these expressions! Fantastic, job well done.

[nibhz]

Thank you so much! If the reader can relate to the poem, it means a lot to the writer! Thanks! :)

[Akshat♥]

Lovely poem..keep writing :)

[nibhz]

thank you :)

[Akshat♥]

you're welcome :)

[Sydney Dreama]

This poem does a wonderful job of painting a picture in the minds eye. Very good, I hope to read more poems like this in future! Please do keep up the good work.

[nibhz]

thank you so much! :) will be posting more very soon!

[Vidushi Sharma]

Come up more with poems di!! they are srly good..!!
sehr gut!! ;)

[nibhz]

thank you! :)

[Vidushi Sharma]

your most welcum!! :D