Untitled

Something I came up with for a contest! What do you think???

As the author finishes up the last pages of his greatest novel

An intruder sneaks in with a knife in hand ready to make his move

 Closer and closer comes the killer to his victim 

Waiting for the right time to strike the fatal blow

The author writes "The killer approaches his victim"

"Slowly drawing his weapon toward the targets head"

"Then with one strike of his sword the victim is dead"

Little did the author know truer words had never been written

The killer now just in the next room plots his attack

Calculates his moves with as much precision to make a clean get away

Leaving little to no evidence behind for the cops

Leaving the victim dead in his chair

The author just about finished his writing looks to find a title

Setting his cursor  to the box at the top waiting to be filled

The last thing that went through his mind was a knife

The killer had in one fowl swoop taken out his victim

Stabbed him in the back of the head 

Leaving him there with his unfinished novel 

Blood soaked key board and computer screen

With his greatest work "Untitled" 

Reviews

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Amazing poem! :)

[InsanityWriter]

Oooo! I like it. ;) Nicely done. ^_^

[Tiffany S]

I love irony and depth in writing, and you've done quite well achieving both my dear :)

[MandaBear]

Thank you!

[Felicity's Eve]

Wow this was so chilling! Good luck! :3

[MandaBear]

Thanks!

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[Calypso]

Nice story. I hope you do well in the contest!

[MandaBear]

Thank you!

[s y e]

I think this is great, good luck with your contest! :) Hope you do well. I actually thought that this was a poem that you didn't know what to call it, ha! Nice!

- Noodle.

[MandaBear]

Thank you! I am glad you liked it