Us

Just something I came up with. Let me know what you think!

You say you're in darkness 

Let me be your light 

You say you need love 

Let me be your heart 

You say you don't need life 

Let me be your strength

You say you're empty inside 

Let me be your soul 

I am in darkness 

You be my light 

I need love 

You be my heart 

I need life

You be my strength 

I am empty inside 

You be my soul 

Let us be....

Together

Let us be...

One

Let us be...

Us 

Darkness is to light as what love is to life 

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love the meaning to this poem, so sweet and romantic, sounds very poetic.
Definitely worth an Award in my contest, well done :)
I like how everything kind of goes well together.
Very well put together.

[Flutterby aish]

Let us be....
Together

Let us be...
One

Let us be...
Us
Wow..........amazing! This is one of the best poems i have ever read! Great work Amanda!

[MandaBear]

Thank you :-) so much. I am glad you liked it

[Felicity's Eve]

"Darkness is to light as what love is to life"

Amazing. :)

A well-deserved 100/100!

[dw817]

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Love is darkness then ? *Grin* Sometimes I read things too literally. I see what you're saying here, and it's lovely.

[s y e]

Awwww, this made me teary eyed! So amazing and emotional! Amazing write.

~ Noodle.

[Tiffany S]

This almost made me tear up :') Love it! And again, I can totally relate to it.