The Void

Just something I came with before bed time. Enjoy!

I cry knowing your not around

I make wishes on the clock to wish you with me

I listen to your songs just to hear your voice

It still doesn't fill the void

Kiss my tears away my lover 

I imagine what it would be like to hold you 

I imagine what you smell like 

It still doesn't fill the void

We are miles apart yet it feels still longer 

My heart longs for your touch 

My body wants your body against mine 

It still doesn't fill the void 

I am feeling lost without you love 

I think about you everyday 

Without you, I am blue 

I need you 

Come fill the emptiness 

Fill my darkness with your light 

Come fill my heart with your love 

Come and fill the void

Reviews

[Krista Weiss]

Gosh! I've a have a giant list of read requests that keep making me want to cry!! Love this so much! < 3

[Sami Khalil]

"I am feeling lost without you love

I think about you everyday

Without you, I am blue

I need you




Come fill the emptiness

Fill my darkness with your light

Come fill my heart with your love"
A very nice write...Those are my faves...Thank you for sharing...:)

[BlueDreams]

A real saddening piece,
An aspiration is being held in your mind for what you've lost,to gain it back again..
Beautiful poem :)

[dw817]

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Isn't there a poem for lovers of distance ? Oh yah, I'm reading it now. :)
Amanda if I didn't tell you, I only see Rose once every 3-weeks. She said I can see anyone I want between that time but - honestly - I wouldn't even know how to approach that so I don't.

I see her this Saturday so I'm looking forward to that, but it is a little rough that I can only see her once every 3rd Saturday and Sunday.

She calls me everyday and lets me know what's happening, but sometimes that's just not as good as a snuzzle listening to good relaxing music.

My advice ? Become lovers with someone who is close to you. I think that might make a big difference in years to come.

[MandaBear]

well this is about someone I do know

[dw817]

There ya go !

[MandaBear]

Yeah the guy really stole my heart

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A talented if all together romantic version of thought, well done.

[MandaBear]

Thanks! this is kind of about someone i know

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

This sounds like a heartbreaking poem, especially for those who have long-distance relationships.

[Coyote Poetry]

Distance can create void. I could feel the sadness and loneliness in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote