I wish I knew

Inspired by stories written on Quotev. I hope you enjoy

I wish I could tell you how I really feel about you 

All those nights thinking, wishing and hoping

Just maybe what they say about you was wrong  

But to no avail  

I wish I could tell you that I love you 

I know I shouldn't love you 

But I love you more than my heart can hold 

I wish I could tell you that I care about you 

I know I shouldn't care 

But I care so much it hurts

I wish I could tell you I want you 

I know I shouldn't want you 

But I want to hold you so close 

You have no idea what you have put my heart through 

I want to believe you 

Love, care and want me too 

I guess I will never know 

You have moved on 

Your heart has been taken by some else 

By a greater power than my own 

A force stronger than mine 

I wish I could tell you how I feel about you 

What good would it do?

All those night thinking, wishing and hoping 

To no avail 

Reviews

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I agree that this is great, there is an amazing word choice on display here and the style is amazing. Great job on this piece.

[DophinBloom]

This is great! I love the way you have set it out and how this poem really makes you think. Well done!



100/100

[MandaBear]

Thanks so much!!! it's kind of about someone too. Shhh Don't tell lol

[DophinBloom]

I wo'nt! :)