Alone

Alone

A Poem by MandaBear
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Feeling like this lately. Whatever I did I hope I can change it.

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I feel like its all my fault 
I once had more friends than I could count
Now ears have fallen silent
No one wants to be my friend

What did I say?
Did I offend you?
Would you rather not be my friend?
Do you hate me?

I don't mean to complain
I just feel like I can't hold a friend
Is it me?
If so I am sorry

Seems no matter what I do
No matter what I say 
I see my world getting darker
I try to make friends with no luck 

I guess I was just meant to be alone
 

© 2014 MandaBear


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ron
It's not you. People have a way of just go missing from our life's. It's the ones that stay that are the true friends. I use to have people in the military I could count on. Now after 20 years in the Army I have one who keeps in contact with me, and my High School friends are all but gone.

Posted 9 Years Ago


MandaBear

9 Years Ago

Yeah I was feeling a little down when I wrote this. sometimes I get feelings like that so i have to .. read more
ron

9 Years Ago

I understand. I do the same thing.
Dear Poet. We will have few true friends in a life. A true friend will come to you at 3am and help you change you tire. A real friend will come to you when you are depress and alone. Family are the base of a life. Love binds us.
"I don't mean to complain
I just feel like I can't hold a friend
Is it me?
If so I am sorry"
Many kinds of friends. I like my pen and paper. Allow me to release without complaining. You are young and if you lead with concern and kindness. You will have many friends dear poet. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well I 'm exactly related with this !.. but my failure is I'm kind but for being unsocial and silent type ..I can't keep friends for long though it doesn't look like when anyone see me but it's like that ;(...

Posted 9 Years Ago


MandaBear

9 Years Ago

I know how you feel. I am the same way. Thanks for the review =)
Lenah Mehzabin

9 Years Ago

U r Welcome : )
Lenah Mehzabin

9 Years Ago

U r welcome : )

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Added on December 22, 2014
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