Lets Make Love

Just another random thought at 12am

Lets make love 

Not just any kind of love 

A love only we know 

A melody our bodies only know the tune of 

Lets make love 

As if the world rested on our song 

A love that can't be put on a map 

A love only traced to us

Lets make love 

A love only our bodies can feel 

Sounds our souls can make

A love we can call our own 

Lets make love 

A love that will last

A love only we can measure

A love that knows no bounds 

Lets make love 

Not just any love 

A love only we know 

Lets make love together 

Reviews

[Jibey]

The shape and the repetition add to the sense of delight and desire that this poem captures... A wonderful celebration of the intensity of love-making

[Coyote Poetry]

When a woman decide love is what she want. A man had no chance. I like the need and the want of the words. The days and nights of loving should be our best days and nights. Nice flow of thoughts took the reader to happy ending. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

Thank you for such a kind review =)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[KittyKatgirl]

Aww a very romantic and beautiful poem. Making love and sex have two different meanings in my opinion. Making love should be used when you love that person and sex is when you dont want anything further. I loved reading this poem and looking forward to reading more of your poetry.

[MandaBear]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I also agree that making love and sex are two different meanings. Making love is knowing you have the person you can dislike and be crazy about all at the same time and sex is just a physical thing.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wow so adorable & romantic lines.....Great work!

[Ahmad Cox]

Truly love your poem. There is a lot of passion and love in your words.

[MandaBear]

Thank you for the review. I am glad you liked it =)

[Cherry]

There's nothing better than good lovemaking. i like your poem.

[MandaBear]

Thank you. I am so glad you liked it

[Inject Positivity]

Im lost in your description about 'love'.....Sounds very pure and passionate.....The way you have highlighted the phrase 'lets make love' makes it more catchy and takes the reader to a journey of an unique but real love world.....Absolute powerpacked one.....Thumbs up!!!! Full rating from me......

[MandaBear]

Thank you so very much! I guess I should write more of my ideas down from the middle of the night lol. I am so very glad you liked this =)

[Inject Positivity]

Well if a midnight idea turns out brilliant like this then you should keep waking up till midnight my frnd.....God bless you....

[Inject Positivity]

Well if a midnight idea turns out brilliant like this then you should keep waking up till midnight my frnd.....God bless you....

[Jim Gill III]

A wonderful capturing in words what can be so elusive in so many ways.

[MandaBear]

Thank you for your kind words =) I am glad you liked my little poem =)