A Love Unrealized

A Love Unrealized

A Poem by MandaBear
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I was inspired by some shows I was watching... (still working title but this is the one I have for now)

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Have you ever had a love so perfect, it’s out of this world?
Longed for the touch, you know you won’t feel?
Longed for the kiss, your lips will never meet?
Longed for the love, you know you will never have?
A love so perfect the stars can’t shine as bright
The sun would seem dim held against it 
Your heart beats so fast time can’t catch up 
All that matters is the two of you and the love you have 
A love so amazing, it felt unreal
Two star crossed lovers forced to keep their love in the shadows
Where only they know how much they care for each other
While wearing a mask for everyone to see, all the while hiding a love no one knows exists 

© 2016 MandaBear


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More deeper and more,more beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very difficult situation to be in. If love has to be kept in the shadows, it is destined to hurt someone....if not more than one someone. Powerful emotions and romance in this one. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


MandaBear

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely review. Much appreciated
Woo-hoo!!! That is amazing Manda, beautiful beautiful... I loved the thoughts in the poem with a touching feel... Simple yet very lovely word choices... Can't help but feel the love in it.... Very well done dear poetess....

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 7 Years Ago


Inject Positivity

7 Years Ago

You are far greater than me my frnd....
MandaBear

7 Years Ago

Okay lets agree to disagree lol haha
Inject Positivity

7 Years Ago

What a line haha...

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Added on April 29, 2016
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