Invisible children

I wrote this poem after i saw a video on youtube. I felt the need to share my feelings. It might not be the best poem but i had to get it out. Please let me know what you think :)

Invisible children stand up 

show your selves, 

Your not alone

We see you, we know your there.

Victims of mindless self control 

No regard for human life

Yet, he's still out there.

Living while they are dying.

Invisible children stand up.

Your shadows now come to light.

You are not alone.

We are here, We are with you.

Bullets flying every where

No one to care 

Hands need to join together 

There is no giving in.

Invisible children stand up. 

Just like a heart beat 

the drum beat carries on.

No longer will you be invisible.

You will be seen... 

You will be heard...

You will be saved... 

I see you... 

I heard you...

I will help save you.

Now you will be seen all around the world....

Author's Note

Please give me our opinions!!

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

Love this. It is inspiring, emotional, and very powerful. Anything we make to bring attention to the problems in this world is much appreciated. We all need to work together to end this. Thank you. Kony2012

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Great message...

Definitely worth reading!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I love it, I believe it gives a strong powerful message!

[Aka_Kitsune]

i love it, it seems like you really put emotion into this write, good job

[jaimemamere]

I enjoyed reading your poem, one can see that whatever the video was that you saw deeply touched your soul. My favorite line is, Your shadows now come to light

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Know the feeling. Lovely read as I sip my morning coffee:)

[Lily Mae]

It takes that one special person to take that one moment to stop and listen..to stop and see.. and that is you :) excellent write Amanda..xo

[Coyote Poetry]

I travel the world on many food and water mission to Asia and Africa. I learn not to understand why war is more important then the homeless and starving people. Your poem is true. They are invisible to most. A million a month die of hunger in Africa. Maybe the concern of a great land should be kindness and food/medicine. Not Soldier and war? A powerful poem. Made me think. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sunflower]

i really like this, if i may ask what video did you watch?