Mind Reader

Let me know what you think :)

He knows what your thinking.

All your hopes; All your dreams.

Every secret, every fear.

There is nothing he can't hear.

He's aware that you stole that cookie.

He sees you drank all the milk.

You gasp; How does he know?

Does he really know my secrets?

He can tell you that you kissed that boy last night.

Even though you didn't tell anyone.

He recognizes that you were pushed into it.

He says everything will be alright.

He's a mind reader, thought stealer 

Dream taker, a secret teller.

No notion unchecked.

No feeling inexperienced.

Its mind over matter they say.

Well, I say your mind matters.

Every idea, brainwave and sound wave.

Knowledge is key to unlocking the mind. 

Yes my dear He even knows what you did last summer. 

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

lovin' this poem's mysterious vibes!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I was interested throughout the whole poem. I think you did a great job on the flow and just the whole idea of a "mind reader". Keep up the good work, Amanda :)

[Lokesh]

Are you talking about conscience? The thing you have described in your poem is conscience. The poem is good. Keep it up.

[Brandon Mathis]

I like it very creative but im just curious are you talking about god or santa claus?

[Calypso]

This makes me think of something we talked about in class the other day. My professor said being a 'mind reader (trying to look past what a person is saying and finding out what they really mean) can stop you from really listening to someone.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. I'm glad no-one know my thoughts and deeds. I could be in trouble. I like the thoughts and statements in this poem. Made the poem a interesting read. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Angelic Surrender]

Your poems are so to-the-point. no guess work to it. I love it . great work :)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Made me feel like I was inside 1984, the big brother thing, you know?
I found kind of interesting you talking about the summer in the last separated verse, it makes me wonder what happened in that summer xD

[Aka_Kitsune]

very well written great job