Cherry Red Lips

Just something I made up while watching whose line is it anyway lol Love or Hate????

Cherry Red Lips...

If I had just one wish

It would surely be this

One day I hope to find

My true loves kiss.

I want to feel your touch

I want to kiss you so much

Feeling your mouth 

Feeling your love.

In my dreams our lips meet

Oh, what a great feat.

In my dreams you are perfect 

My true love so sweet.

Cherry Red Lips...

Please don't keep them waiting

My desire to feel your lips

Is ever greater day by day

In my heart is where you lay.

My love, My love

Oh, I wish to kiss you all over

Not missing an inch

Oh, with my cherry red lips.

My desire for your body is over powering

To touch and feel and be so close.

To know we are one 

To become one soul

Cherry Red Lips...

I am going use my lips 

To kiss my one that's true

For you I will save 

My sweet cherry red lips.

Reviews

[Leone]

Sweet indeed! I love the use of the cherry red to describe the innocence of a kiss that comes from love!

[Coyote Poetry]

Cherry red lips are always a pleasure for a lucky man. I like the way you led the reader into the vision of red lips and possibilities of sweet kisses. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Aka_Kitsune]

Love :D great write

[SuicidePact.]

I really like this!!

[Calypso]

Back last year I used to wear red lipstick. Sure it cost me a job interview, but I felt as sexy as hell. Reading this made me think of the past, and reminds me that I have pretty lipstick waiting for me.

[Cassie Fraga]

MMMM.... such a tasty lovers plea!!! can really feel the yearn, fantastic write!!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

very straightforward and smooth...

definitely worth reading

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I find it's not always attractive for some reason for a guy to want to kiss a lady with lipstick. Strange, but it seems to turn them off, so I've found. Creative piece, though. Nicely done.

[Le parisien]

love or hate? .... LOVE !!! Enjoyed how talking about something quite physical like lips you adapted the poem to it filling it with physical images :) Also loved the still-rudimentary but existing rhyme scheme, in the first three stanzas the first two verses rhyme, in the forth stanza the last two verses rhyme while in the last one, not only the first and the last verse rhyme but it does with the same word !!
Great work, great piece

[Lokesh]

Do you know difference between love and lust? Your poem is full of lust, not love.