I want __________

I want __________

A Poem by MandaBear
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I got inspiration from a picture! I hope you like it :P Love or hate??

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I want to love you
I want to see your face everyday
I want to your face to be the last thing I see 
I want to kiss your lips with all my might
I want to be there for you whenever you need me
I want to be make you laugh all the time
I want to put strawberries in your mouth 
I want to say I love you everyday to you
I want to touch every part of you 
Before I go anywhere, I want you to kiss me every time
I want to come home to your smiling face
I want to hear your voice as often as I can
I  want to make sure your well taken care of
I want to see you in the shower
I want to dream of you 
I want to cuddle with you while we watch t.v.
I want you to be the only one next to me forever
I want You.

© 2013 MandaBear


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i love this keep up the work

Posted 12 Years Ago


When we want things. That is good. We still have desire and need left. I like the flow of wants and the very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw, Amanda! This is totally sweet! I really like it! Oh, love, haha!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


AWW SO SWEET "I WANT YOU" "I NEED YOU" ONE AND THE SAME AT TIMES OUR WANTS AND NEEDS. ALL THIS LOVE POETRY GETS TO ME AT TIMES I AM TEMPORARILY LIVING ACROSS THE COUNTRY FORM MY MAN AND MISS HIM SO WILL BE NOVEMBER BEFORE HE IS ABLE TO MOVE BACK HERE TO ME. THIS POEM MAKES ME SO THINK OF MY SWEET GINO

Posted 12 Years Ago


:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice and it is so true when you want to love someone

Posted 12 Years Ago


This one too has space for lust. And is 'to' necessary in the third line?
-Swargasmith

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cute. I like the ending "I want you"
In general it was really nice as well.
I had many "Aw" moments

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awh, I love it. Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 12, 2012
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