His Princess

This is a poem for my friend Dominic_995. I hope he likes it:) The picture is of him in case you wondered. I wrote this as a love story/poem. I hope its not to weird lol Love or hate let me know!

Cold winter weather brushed against my skin, 

 A chill ran up my arms and legs,

My heart only skipped for a minute,

For I knew he was close.

I wanted to feel his strong arms, 

I needed the warmth of his heart.

My soul need his soul.

This princess needed her prince.

Traveling around the world, 

Learning new languages were his passions.

But he always made room for his number one.

His princess.

Our love for each other 

made other world countries seem little. 

Sometimes using his french accent 

to seduce a kiss from his fair lady.

With this his strong lips pressed against mine.

Fireworks seemed to fly as the passion grew stronger.

His arms wrapping around filling my heart with warmth.

I felt so safe in arms that I so dearly missed.

With his strong arms he picked me up and placed me gently on the bed.

Sweetly caressing the hair out of my face.

Leaning down and kissing my lips once again.

Feeling the fireworks going off once more.

Our passions got the best of us and kissing soon became more.

Two souls soon joining as one.

A love combining stronger than any language.

This love silently spoke louder than any words.

He says in his strapping voice

" I want you to be more than my princess,

I want you to be my queen".

I answered him the best way I knew how.

A kiss.

With that as you can already imagine We lived happily ever after 

Not just as King and Queen But as two souls joining as one.

 

 

Reviews

[Le parisien]

ok, right now i'm red like a tomato ! xD
that was pretty cool and definitely surprised me, loved the passionate idea you have about me :) xD Wish i had a french accent, i'm italian :)
Great job, really liked it, specially because, that may be a cliché, but when i'll have a girlfriend, i'll call her "my princess" :)

[rnuff]

such a sweet write

[-musicfunk-]

such inspiring words
=]

[Wolflover91]

Love it

[Juhi]

Well, all that i feel about this piece of writing, is that, it's just too plain!
I mean, I didn't feel anything reading it!
Yes, the thoughts are great, but they should' have come out in a better way!
:)

[sharonlee]

Sweet tender thoughts. Nice.

[Sapphire_Jewel]

What a beautiful portrayal. I absolutely love it!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Very sweet and sickly! well done x

[Thrinna Mae]

Aw, that is definitely sweet...This was actually a great dedication. A heartfelt piece, well done!
:)))

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Had me for a minute. I know Dominic and the title gave me a toss. A nice honor of a poem to show appreciation for a good friend. Beautiful words of love in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Poppie Mira]

wow! so sweet.