Cracked perception

just something i made up. i hope you enjoy it :)

You are just a fixture upon the wall 

What makes you think you know it all?

Telling us who is the prettiest gal 

Well, I say what do you know pal?

Just a craked reflection

A mirrored image of your former self

You never had any good intentions

Is that something you forgot to mention?

Telling one girl she isnt pretty enough

Saying to one guy "your not so tough"

Think your all powerful because you have a face

Really you are just an empty space

Mirror, Mirror on the wall 

Do you think you have it all?

Mirror. Mirror on the wall

Who now is the fairest of them all?

Is it Bell,Ariel,or Snow White?

The Beast, Gaston,or Prince John?

Mirror, Mirror on the wall 

Can you really see at all? 

Reviews

[Krithika Raghavan]

Ah, the mirror on the wall
So astounded by its fall...
Your cracked perception~
I love the style used~tons!

[Honey54]

THIS IS A GREAT PIECE! IT DID DRAW A MAGNIFICENT PICTURE OF ALL THE CHARACTERS ! MAYBE EVEN A MUSICAL NUMBER FROM THE MUSICAL FLOW! :-]

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is great and I love the Disney background to it! It's true that the mirror is always what makes people think they're not good enough or pretty for someone. This was well-written indeed! :D
Mistakes:
(Saying to one guy "your not so tough") -- *Saying to one guy "you're not so tough*
(Think your all powerful because you have a face) --*Think you're all powerful because you have a face*
(Mirror. Mirror on the wall) -- *Mirror, Mirror on the wall*

Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Hatchling]

Love it

[Ink Angel]

I love the feistiness of this one! this guy has a huge ego! I bet he doesnt match it for one minute ! infact I bet he cracks it, the mirror that is lol ! Keep writing love this its got guts :)

[Emrys Realmskip]

Wonderful, and very intense also thoughtful. good piece! Keep it up =)

[Bryan Micheni]

I saw high school on this all over again:-) I like.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Amazing, technically speaking, that's the best poem you've written lately !! Lovable choice to use quatrains, amazing, and admirable choice to use a rhyme scheme and to work so well on it ! I'd like to remark the fact that stanza 1,2 and 3 follows one rhyme for every stanza !! Talking about stanza 3, i loved the fact you've chosen to take it from a fairytale and the way you used it fit perfectly with your poem ! :)
I think it's needless to say how much pathos is in this poem so i will simply say:
Great job =D

[Pax]

smile, a very nice ending and such clever manner. enjoyed it. keep it up