artist on strings

artist on strings

A Poem by nightmask
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a poem......ya thats pretty much it

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 You call me an artist

BUT WHAT IF I LIKE TO WRITE?

you call me a soldier

BUT WHAT IF I REFUSE TO FIGHT?

AM I ONLY A PUPPET TO FUFILL YOUR ENJOYMENT?

am I only an artist on strings

encourage me, build me up then you clip my wings?

Tell me Tell me I implore! 

who is the real puppeteer in this game of war?

 I'M NOT A POET

i'm an artist

I'M NO RAVEN

im a crow

THESE FEELINGS FROM INSIDE I MUST SUPPRESS

so nevermore shall you know

© 2010 nightmask


Author's Note

nightmask
yes I am aware that some scentences are capitalized and other are not

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Very Unique style here, I enjoyed this Piece...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh so true people just go ahead and assume sometimes in there mind they have you labeled a image of you were you cant be more or less.

Great write, thanks for submitting it!
:) elyssa

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good! I enjoyed the stand up rebellion in this one. Good luck in the contest! Cheers,lea I can't wait to read more of you....

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. I understand exactly what your saying here. Good write !

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice i like it. i n ow th feeling. all to well. but i've broken free. but it was hard. keap up the great work
Luv ya
Aileen

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Puppets on a string can get played when we dont pull them ourselves giving them the power to create their own scenarios to suit themselves.Follow what you love gifts can be many and with the passion we can explore pulling our own strings pleasing them no more. Shelly

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice last line!!!! it rhymes AND it gives ur poem a sense of closure. beautifuly created and wonderfully original. you are much more in depth with your own emotions and your own life then many other writers today, and your imagery is also wonderfully crafted. keep up the good work!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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nightmask
nightmask

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i am me, there is not much else to say. i like sweeney todd, tim burton, anime, and bright shiny colors, lol(z) ha ha. i was recently diagnosed with abcd, no...wait...asbd....adad.....ughhh......(mean.. more..

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