choke on candy

if you are a jerk or mean to someone who hasn't done anything to you and you feel like their a freak and you think you have the right to make fun of them I WANT YOU TO CHOKE

 We, means you

             I, mean no one

you know what to do

             you say I'm crazy

you yell across the lunchroom at me

             "BURN IN HELL!"

do you really think that would bother me?

             as you laugh with your "friends"

can you imagine how s****y my day was?

            no, I bet you can't

well it's so bad someone died

           so shut up and if you can't

stick a LOLLIPOP in your mouth

           I hope it's coated in sugary fire

just like your annoying words

           almost irresistible to not counter

I hope you choke I hope you die

             then I'll laugh and say

BURN IN HEAVEN

             as a fly gnaws at your eye

as maggots infest your lungs

            and heart think of me

not when your dead

            but when your torn apart

 

 

Author's Note

choke if you suck on candy and think it's funny to stick them onto people

Reviews

[scorpion-red]

you did exactly what this contest is looking for

[scorpion-red]

wow this was....strong i really felt the anger in the words

[No]

wow. was someone making fun of you today?