NVR FRSKN

(never forsaken, the asylum) about an outcast in an asylum he's locked away but not forgotten

 i'M aLoNe BuT, NVR FRSKN

I'M ISOLATED

    IN

                  

 

       MY

MIND

 

 

I FEAR 

  I SHALL NEVER 

R

 E

  A

   W

    A

     K

      E

       N

I STILL SEEK

                    Q?U?E?S?T?I?O?N 

I MAY

          nEVER

F

     I

N   

     D

I

D

    issa

        pear

into>

T  O  G  T  

 ^   ^   ^  ^

 h  u   h  s

 

SO

S....SSS...SH...SH...A.AH..KK....KEH....KE...NNNUHH

THAT

                 THE

                      Y

AL

MO

ST

 

M1A1K1E

        ME

                            SIGN

                              

AwAy  at

 

M

Y

 

SHunNIng

 

I'm..............................

.

......................

       ........................... ALONE

 

BUT, NVR FRSKN

 

TO 

T

H

i

s

    

society

o       t

c       e

i        i

e       c

t       o

yteicos

 

i 

 

FInd

a

WAY>>>>>>>>>

TO

             ST

AY

 

 

BIND

-DEAD

 

...............AS.........A

 

         (((((((((ROCK)))))))))))))

   C       N

 

I      A        'T

 

 

EV////EN

 

FLOAT

^^^^

to 

 

the 

 

         S^^///U/////^^^^R...///FACE (O.O)

A

n

Y

m

O

r

E

       and 

 

 

 

 

 

...........................I STILL

AM 

 

A..........L..............O.................N.............E

 

 

BUT,

NVR FRSKN

ONLY MY MIND IS LOST

 

Author's Note

HOPE YOU LIKE IT! :) AND QUESTION IS NOT SUPPOSED TO BE QUESTIONS!!! SO IF U TELL ME THAT U'LL B IN TROUBLE FOR NOT READING THIS!!!!

Reviews

[~angelalala~]

after a few read throughs, i finally deciphered the actual poem & think its beautiful. brilliant choice of words, and the flow is very smooth. i do love the way you've laid it out, its very artistic & intriguing, but makes it difficult to follow & actually understand. i think the poem is beautiful & emotional on its own. it describes insanity, loneliness, in itself with the distracting layout. but overall i really loved this poem.

[Rhan F. Sydney]

Very good message...Torment, pain, etc...Thank you very much for the submission

[ScaryTrees]

I like the innovation
In a few spots I had to puzzle it out
Maybe try to streamline the layout a bit to keep it flowing
overall though I think it's a cool piece
Nice Work ;)

[Lestat's daughter]

I love it! I love how you designed the lay out, love the wording and creativity. Really well written and I was very surprised to see a poem like this. No one's done it like this before and that makes it stand out. You did an awsome job here and I hope to see more poems of yours like this.

[Lestat's daughter]

I love it! I love how you designed the lay out, love the wording and creativity. Really well written and I was very surprised to see a poem like this. No one's done it like this before and that makes it stand out. You did an awsome job here and I hope to see more poems of yours like this.

[No]

QUESTION IS SUPPOSED TO BE QUESTIONS!!!
haha lmao jk
I liked it a lot even though it was confusing most of the time =]

[A sea person]

Hey, is question supposed to be... ^^ hahaha

Interesting... I'm not going to lie to you, this was very difficult to read. It definitely communicated the insanity though. Incredibly difficult to read, to the point where I almost had to give up. I suppose that is the point, though...

Not one of my favorites of yours, but good none-the-less.

v.r.
Ryan