I can't (shame)

I can't (shame)

A Poem by nightmask
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this is about someone who really cares for a girl and shes going to get married to a guy he really hates and he can't tell her how much he loves her

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 I can’t write

when you won’t read

I cannot fight

what anger I cannot feed

I can’t go on

without you here

I cannot sing

without you, my ears

I can’t breath

without your air

I cannot cut my heart

to make it fair

I can’t see without

your gaze

I cannot find my way out

of your haunting maze

I find myself lost inside

my throat

every time you don’t see me

and he gloats

about you and him

Love is a battle field

and I will never win

I can’t hold up my shield any longer

I will not suffer

The fate which was never meant to be mine

I cannot be stronger

for you

for you were my strength

I can’t drive my eyes 

from the bait

you hold out in front of my hands

I cannot grip 

those strands

that hang down in front of your face

for all I am 

is the tool for you to erase

every insignificant moment

we were in the same room

I can’t object to your groom

for I cannot be 

what you need 

but I can be full of greed

© 2009 nightmask


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I love the metaphors, so true to feeling love lost. The helplessness, knowing anger will do no good, knowing she can't or won't bother to see. My favorite lines: "I cannot cut my heart//to make it fair" and "I cannot be stronger for you, for you were my strength" They tell so much, so deeply.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was great but is so sad that he couldn't tell her how he felt. I would stop the wedding. :) I like it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 17, 2009

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i am me, there is not much else to say. i like sweeney todd, tim burton, anime, and bright shiny colors, lol(z) ha ha. i was recently diagnosed with abcd, no...wait...asbd....adad.....ughhh......(mean.. more..

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