love me?

love me?

A Poem by nightmask
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to my love on valentine's day your secret lover I will stay (this is about a secret admirer's letter to their crush just before valentine's day)

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 Love me never

love turns cold

I know not ever 

will my love for you

grow old

and wash away

you remain the only one

who with I wish to spend the day

or week or month or year

for all eternity

never fear

love is a killer

love unfolds

I’ve always done 

what I was told

then I met

you and

my heart wouldn’t behave

but it doesn’t

tell me if you love this foolish nave

who’s in love with

your eyes, your skin your hair

I feel so blissfully trapped everywhere

because you zapped

me with your arrow

by mistake

it hit my sallow

heart 

so fast I thought it'd break. 

 

 

I hope this crush

will forever last

like a tattoo

etched into

my skin by glass

now tis

your heart

I’m out to win

I pray in time

for no delay

and only to begin

will you be mine?

on valentine’s day?

Is what this

silly rhyme

meant to say

love me never

love me how?

It’s all right

I don’t need the answer right now

but please with haste

make up your mind

so my love for you

may unwind

into your open hands 

I’d love

to touch

just know

I love you

so friggin much.

© 2009 nightmask


Author's Note

nightmask
hope u like please review :)

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this is very sweet!! If a guy gave this to me I would be very wooed. I hope your crush likes it! Thank you for entering my contest. :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's sweet ,good flow, nice ryhming...Good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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i am me, there is not much else to say. i like sweeney todd, tim burton, anime, and bright shiny colors, lol(z) ha ha. i was recently diagnosed with abcd, no...wait...asbd....adad.....ughhh......(mean.. more..

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