The day the earth stopped spinning

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH"

one day

the earth stopped rotating, continuing revolving around the sun there was longer days and longer nights, it caused catastrophic changes in the world and climates and many disastrous adjustments like devastation earth quacks in part of the world where theirs never been one


the oceans sea waters migrated over to the north-pole, connecting continents together, now England people and people from France would be able to walk from one place to another. while gravity pulls more water towards the arctic ocean, the lowlands of Siberia and northern Canada would become submerged

people are in fear and people from the south have a harder time breathing now! and warm fish water die and appear on the beaches! Miami will experience freezing cold blizzards! and the ones that decided to stay find them selves out of electricity and food. so most decide to flee in find of a new ground

the old and the young are at risk! so good thing im 20 almost healthy and alive! everything is flooded new york Boston and other places along with other countries from the south! texas and mexico decide to team up! so they hold hands and sail off to the sea! because texas and mexico were in love. they had a fight and build a wall between them because mexico was being a b***h and didnt want to buy texas that new cool 3g phone that came out. but settled out their differences and like i said. sailed off to where they can breath and stuff so people from mexico and us texans are saved from this horror! i think all this happened was because the lizard people from there the earths core is, they stopped having their raves which made them dance ... and now that they stopped dancing the earth stopped moving and many lives were taken,

meanwhile up on earth England is no more. the riches and famous buildings and under water like Atalanta... "everyone from England died ... all the tax payers died  everything that the queen own and bought including her newly bought white pearl teeth that she bought with her tax payer  money!... no more tax payers no more queen no more princess on nothing.... they had no where to run so they all died in a way this is a relief cause if i lived in England i would want to pay for an expensive a*s wedding dress that i wont be able to wear and the jewels and pretty things i wont be able to see a wedding that im not even invited to! thats fucked up! watching it on tv aint nothing compared to being there... and i work all day and i pay for where the QUEENS lazy  pampered a*s gets to sit all day and rule! thast not fair! why is this!! f**k that why is there even a queen in the first place.. what is this princess going to do huh screw around be lazy with her new husband and sleep all day party all night. ride her many horses on lands that she now shares! poor us people poor us tax paying people that fills the queens tub with precious diamonds and buys her new teeth because she eats the corn from ana's land corn fields! im going to see if texas will let me ride with them!" said a 25 yr old male

"WHY IS THE QUEEN STILL THE QUEEN !! WHY does this lady get to become princess what did she ever do! damn it
"sir!! England is down" said one of the guys from the white house

"is the queen gone" said the president

"yes sir gone... england is no more" said the guy

"good" said president

"so ... sir all this .. killing of millions of people. stopping the earth from spinning for this  just to overthrow the queen for not inviting you to the wedding?"

>=( "yes, now find a way to make the earth spin again! i wanna enjoy a vacation to Miami!!
 

Reviews

[humansalwayswantmore;it..]

lmao! what an imagination you have dude!!! this is funny

[Alphachad]

HAHAHAha this story made my day xD

[Goodbye]

Oh so dark, weaving intrigue with global climate change - excellent! Since Scribbler outlined the grammar stuff - I won't re-do. But very different, very interesting!

[Scribbler79]

This story really scared me. I know it's just a story, but the way you wrote it, it's almost like you were able to see into the future.

Just a thing or two: '...underwater like Atalanta'...did you actually mean Atlantis?

I've also noticed some punctuation errors, particularly in the dialogue.

Other than those minor quibbles, I thought this story was very well-written.