Lady riders

the feeling of riding life

   to enjoy true life

you have to ride to live

to live life

you have to live to ride

 

      I always knew i had different interest then the rest of the little girls from class, of course i loved the color pink only because its feminim, and after all i am a female. im certainly not going to show a false unique side and dislike all that is girly like! when i was 10 years of age, coming home from a long day at the boresome mall with my mom and dad. i saw something amazing that lit my eyes. usually if you see bike riders, the lady is siting in the back holdin on to her man, but not here. i saw a group of lady riders. and no male in sight! this image gave me the first feeling of female strength inside me, i thought to my self! "could this be real not some crazy fanasy of mine" nope it was real, i was seeing it. im a child looking up to these group of women they look so strong, not physically strong i mean strong as in high power.  intimidating looks one daring to risk her life not wearing a protective helmet! one who appears to be the leader, a firey red head, or from what i see, its her hair thats out tangling and out of her helmet. made sense, red is the color of fire, fire nothing can stop fire from blazing and razing many things to the ground, nothing can top fire. she was a tough lady i imagin, to take place in the front. a brown headed women turned and looked at me. i saw her srtong eyes, i thought to my self, i preten it was me. what i would feel if i rode that bike, something told me what she was thinking. its as if she was telling me something from a distance, fear nothing, feel nothing. females have to make something of themselves of course! its strange how that came up to my mind? all 4 of them lined up at this light stop i took one last view of them. they wear all very pretty, wow i want to be like that when i get older! to ride a bike you get respect, cause bikers are real fearless human beings. they are riding the devils dog! so many things can happen! maybe thats how they conqure fear, maybe fear to them is the way they see life. my friend once told me, if your afraid then youll never do anything in life. never be afraid. just face it. the 4 strong females dressed in denim and leather, i can tell had a stong bond between them. these are the type of role models i wanna look up to. not these high class b*****s talking about politicas and lies or the other ones showing me that beauty is make up... false old ladies advertising a cream to make you appear younger when the seller doesnt show to be old at all. i want this in my life. i want the wind in my face and the rushing fast feeling of the motor! i want the fear to leave my mind and race to the top of el paso's mountains! go against the devil and his demons! i want to ride in the open roads and leave societys raging wars. i wan to be free, A true rider

Author's Note

does it sound to much like high school level tell me >

o just to let you know i didnt go back to fix anything! :D

Reviews

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Totally agree with you! I want to ride a motorcycle one day!

[nighttimesnoozer]

the truth is i dont ever go back to correct!!!! i dont give a damn about critizing as long as it aint about my jacket... but yeah! i can right pro or high school ....

thanks i like comments like those!

[Geralyn Miller]

The only thing "high school" about this piece is the fact you frequently don't capitalize words that should be, i.e. proper nouns, the pronoun "I". The content is mature, as in not "high school". You have a distinct and unique point of view, don't ever let anyone try to "cookie cutter" you!
I am going to be an honest critic because you seem to be a writer who understands that criticism helps us improve as writers. Plus, I love reading divergent viewpoints.
You have a tendency to run on sentences, making long sentences makes it more difficult for the reader. I used to be very guilty of this, a reviewer pointed this out , actually, a lot more than one reviewer. I worked on it, and always check my work for run ons before I post it. Also, use spellcheck, please. I look forward to reading more of your work

[humansalwayswantmore;it..]

oooo =] "i want to ride in the open roads and leave society's raging wars..."that kinda rhymed. =]

[nighttimesnoozer]

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