Another Try...

Another Try...

A Poem by N!LoC

the sun seems to be setting soon...

so i guess i’ll take an evening walk...  

as the sun slowly gives way to the moon...

my inner self begins to talk...


i ponder on things that are on my mind...

 as i feel the winds blowing strongly my way...

emotions take over and i suddenly find...

myself feeling the way when i wrote "Astray"...


forgiveness - contempt...

hurt, pain and sorrow...

resentment - bitter silence...

then tears soon follow...


i lift my head up and look to the sky...

and see a bird flying freely up so high...

it inspires me to believe and not ask "why"...

just believe, have faith, & to give love...

another try...



© 2013 N!LoC



Author's Note

N!LoC
please don't forget to click on "Astray" for a link to that poem :-)

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it isnt how many times you fail it is how whether you get up when your knocked down that makes a man

Posted 4 Years Ago


N!LoC

4 Years Ago

well... i guess i am more of a "man" than i give myself credit for :-)
Tate Morgan

4 Years Ago

A man can always take comfort
from the things he must abide
To look in the mirror fall.. read more
Ahh, I like it. well done.


Posted 4 Years Ago


N!LoC

4 Years Ago

thanks ! :-)
It's a calming read, like a breath of fresh air...

just believe, have faith, & to give love...
another try...
Nice....

promoting your own poem in a poem, that's a new one! ;-)



Posted 4 Years Ago


N!LoC

4 Years Ago

Ooo I love it when some one quotes their fav line from one of my poems ... :-)
wonderful read...keep writing

Posted 4 Years Ago


N!LoC

4 Years Ago

thank you! and you too!
Devanshu Rajput

4 Years Ago

welcome
I don't know why, but when I read your work I'm always so taken away. Your words have a way of making me feel the emotion that is written. This is great, as always! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


N!LoC

4 Years Ago

Oh my god... The comments and reviews I get ... URGH it's so unbelievably humbling to know what I pu.. read more
I like the flow and style and could relate to some of the feelings you talked about, nicely done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


N!LoC

4 Years Ago

thank u b.wilson :-)
For a quick moment while reading, I just took a deep breath and my stress all melted away. Thank you for that moment of peace :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


N!LoC

4 Years Ago

oh my... seriously??? oh my god.. thank you so much c.c .... that means so much to me... :-)
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Strange I know but it was very calming and hopeful, I felt very peaceful haha my pleasure!!
Hope, you always give us hope through your poems. Love and hope and life flow through your pieces like beautiful butterflies.. Loved it

Posted 4 Years Ago


N!LoC

4 Years Ago

ooooo u said butterflies!!!! lol... so symbolic .... thanks keegan !!!
I am always so taken with your work...the emotion is quite often breathtakingly sad, but with just enough hope to bring me back around...I really am such a big fan of your work. Thank you so much for sharing it with us, N...

Posted 4 Years Ago


N!LoC

4 Years Ago

oh yeah... i have been drawing inspiration from sadness lately... but im sure i'll turn that around .. read more
KAOlmsted

4 Years Ago

Sweetness And Light (your official name) ;-) you are on my radar. My pleasure.
well written dude meandering solemn in just a few words for those who don't like to read much very good

Posted 4 Years Ago


N!LoC

4 Years Ago

short and sweet... thats my poem writing moto ! :-)
Deron Alexis

4 Years Ago

cool as long as the point is made that's mine

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Added on February 1, 2013
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I am someone who can't help but daydream all day long... and I find most of my inspiration from mainly just being an eternal child and a hopeless romantic wondering about that crazy little thing call.. more..

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