Complications

UPDATE: This was written at an emotional time,and I am okay about everything now. However, I will leave it up because I know others can relate.

Invested time
Patience been tested
In all the ways you had neglected
How I felt
Was disrespected
I'm losing focus
And you're losing interest.
Hard to find fond feelings
when I know you won't miss them.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar

Reviews

[barleygirl]

It makes me sad to read this, becuz of all the years spent enduring such sub-standard situations in my own life. By the time I learned to follow my gut feelings about things, now I'm too old to have the world at my fingertips like I did before! Oh well! It makes me feel good when a young person like yourself is learning to see when things are too far gone. Your details really paint a realistic picture of how this feels. Fondly, Margie

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you Margie. Your thoughts are always appreciated! And you know what they say, hindsight is 20/20 lol

[Shineheemi]

what do you mean ignore grammar when the feelings is still there. salutes you Fanicia E. :)
i feel sad and kinda in pain while reading this, strangely it feels so good though..

[T.S. Sky]

This piece is very relatable. Men can be douchebags sometimes.

[Fanicia E.]

Ha! Tell me about it, but I'd like to think my douchebag detector is getting better and better with time.

[T.S. Sky]

I like to think so too about myself.

[Daphine Gray]

this is a highly touching for and from a women that has been broken but has found to move on from it.

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you for the review and taking time to read this piece Daphine!

[Williams Ike]

You are such a great love poet. You are well skilled in exploring the emotional past ,present and future. The complications, weirdness & sorrows of being in love are all portrayed in your poem. I love you Fanicia

[Fanicia E.]

You love me? lol Thank you for reading it and I'm glad you enjoy my work!

[Nora]

This is so sad and related to me :( ,it's so deep

[Fanicia E.]

I know it's hard, but if anything try to use those experiences and emotions you're dealingto grow from. Thank you for the review Nora. :)

[Nora]

You're welcome dear :)

[Ty]

Word's that run deep as rivers.

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you Ty!

[Tobo]

Deep. Yet oddly satisfying. I love how easy it is to relate with this

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you Tobo

[Poetic License]

Whew! A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.

One one hand, I am so sorry that you even had to write this piece. It has so many "feels," I'm not even going to start naming them. It absolutely packs one hell of a wallup. So universal, and so well said.

As always, I love your vulnerability and your transparency. Sending hugs and wishing your heart peace. My heart is here for you.

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you so much, for your review and the well wishes! :)