Succubus

The succubus
Is not at rest.
She trails along
Aimlessly.
Uninterested in those that give their hearts
But would rather bathe in carnality.
Forbidden moments.
Alluring pain.
Seeking life from all her encounters
But her own
Barely
Remains.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love you for turning me on to "SUCCUBUS"!!! I love this word! There's so much that could be done with it. And you've done it up nicely here. Despite your brevity (which always leaves me wanting more), you've packed a sufficient number of good details into this, so that we get the idea clearly & impactfully. I better write this word down, becuz I gotta use it someday. I love writers that love words, becuz it really shows . . . here's wishing you & your loved ones a delicious Christmas season (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you Margie, and have a wonderful Christmas as well!

[Lavi]

Such little writing that conveys huge meanings and people these days. Great writing here and this speaker definitely has a strong heart to make it so far despite their feelings of fading :)

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you lovely Lavi :)