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A Poem by James Takeo Panton

Quiet, trim, green lawns

Summer night-bugs, chirping loud

Underneath street-lamps

 

© 2008 James Takeo Panton


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Congratulations for winning the haiku contest!

Posted 14 Years Ago
a haiku that everyone can relate to in summer...
green lawn & lots of bugs.
good syllable counts...nicely done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this kind of reminds me of bugs life when all the bugs would buzz around the street lamps

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on July 16, 2008
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James Takeo Panton
James Takeo Panton

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada, Canada



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I am a 38-year old amateur and have only recently started writing some stuff. I began putting down these words around November, 2007, and discovered that I enjoyed doing this, and now I am seeing w.. more..

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