What's going on!

What's going on!

A Poem by nisha
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Feeling of human who thinks no one is with him, except his hope

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What's going on!
It seems to me,
My world is changed,
My known one's are changed,
Just because
I am now old
Is that the reason?
I can't take my decisions
on my own?
What's happening to me?
No one is caring about my desire,
I feel as rag in the old age,
even my hand are not with me,
always trembling,
always shivering,
but in the deep of my heart,
there is a hope...

© 2017 nisha


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Yeah.. at times we will not be able to make our own decisions. I think you wrote about teens.

Keep high..well done!

~Sandra.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the message of the poem - hope in the heart - inspite of all the changes, the ravages of age

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 7, 2016
Last Updated on January 15, 2017
Tags: What, going, on, changed, decisions, desire, deep, heart, hope

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